tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post2089269675536079056..comments2023-03-25T03:58:38.406-07:00Comments on Awahono's Room 6 Blog: Patrick's The Day I Met A Space CreatureUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post-40533502408175825012013-06-20T19:34:38.775-07:002013-06-20T19:34:38.775-07:00From paddy a.k.a patrickFrom paddy a.k.a patrickroom 6https://www.blogger.com/profile/01571266081124179163noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post-37609912123210314752013-06-20T19:33:49.830-07:002013-06-20T19:33:49.830-07:00Sorry about the gramma and stuff guys thanks for t...Sorry about the gramma and stuff guys thanks for the comments hope to talk with youse soon byroom 6https://www.blogger.com/profile/01571266081124179163noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post-63972498005040215762013-06-20T13:06:04.435-07:002013-06-20T13:06:04.435-07:00Hi Patrick
Nice story you used good words and it ...Hi Patrick<br /><br />Nice story you used good words and it was funny<br />From Megan-Riccarton primary school<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post-28051620717183208022013-06-19T20:26:13.464-07:002013-06-19T20:26:13.464-07:00Hi Patrick,
We found your story quite funny.What ...Hi Patrick,<br /><br />We found your story quite funny.What you could improve on is self editing such as checking for grammatical mistake, capital letters. We found that a bit of your story did not really make sense.<br /><br />Shanita and EmilyEmilyhttp://56steps.global2.vic.edu.aunoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post-7247582089441293472013-06-19T20:22:22.471-07:002013-06-19T20:22:22.471-07:00Hi Patrik,
love your story i love how you met a s...Hi Patrik,<br /><br />love your story i love how you met a space creacher.<br /><br />Natashanatashahttp://56steps.global2.vic.edu.au/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post-20796249217859127522013-06-19T20:20:28.663-07:002013-06-19T20:20:28.663-07:00Hello Patrick,
My name is Holly and I'm from 5...Hello Patrick,<br />My name is Holly and I'm from 56steps.<br />I thought that your story was very despricptive,however, if it were my story, I would of used similies to describe how I felt.<br /><br />Yours truly,<br />HollyHollyhttp://56steps.global2.vic.edu.au/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post-33175526089156399462013-06-19T20:11:23.627-07:002013-06-19T20:11:23.627-07:00Dear Patrick,
My name is Joshua,
your story was in...Dear Patrick,<br />My name is Joshua,<br />your story was intresting because of its great amount of descriptive language, but your punctuation wasn't that great.<br />Hope you visit our blog.<br />From your new blog buddy JoshuaJoshuahttp://56steps.global2.vic.edu.au/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post-26135322648706814912013-06-19T15:51:21.577-07:002013-06-19T15:51:21.577-07:00Nice story Patrick! :)
-Kosmas, Riccarton Primary ...Nice story Patrick! :)<br />-Kosmas, Riccarton Primary SchoolAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post-78798587992191730652013-06-19T15:33:34.459-07:002013-06-19T15:33:34.459-07:00This is a really great story :)
Hannah This is a really great story :)<br /><br />Hannah Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post-51945733717058745552013-06-19T15:29:12.940-07:002013-06-19T15:29:12.940-07:00Great story room 6 you had a good use of words, KE...Great story room 6 you had a good use of words, KEEP IT UPAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com