tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post3514786396925148590..comments2023-03-25T03:58:38.406-07:00Comments on Awahono's Room 6 Blog: Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post-11210246106654069442013-06-18T17:23:42.542-07:002013-06-18T17:23:42.542-07:00Hi George I like your story because its credible a...Hi George I like your story because its credible and realistic. What I'd improve on is don't use as much of 'as I begin to panic' I've seen that a couple times but its a very interesting story. :)room 6https://www.blogger.com/profile/01571266081124179163noreply@blogger.com