tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post4928310692464835845..comments2023-03-25T03:58:38.406-07:00Comments on Awahono's Room 6 Blog: Aaliyahs story about The day I jumped out of a plane Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post-49063026532785350532013-06-17T17:17:35.451-07:002013-06-17T17:17:35.451-07:00:) :) room 6https://www.blogger.com/profile/01571266081124179163noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post-80660219581799794402013-06-17T17:04:45.048-07:002013-06-17T17:04:45.048-07:00ThanksThanksroom 6https://www.blogger.com/profile/01571266081124179163noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post-89034533683042979002013-06-17T15:37:22.120-07:002013-06-17T15:37:22.120-07:00Excellent story. I liked how you described what yo...Excellent story. I liked how you described what you were wearing and explained what your hair was looking like.<br /><br />Next time you should proof-read and spell check.<br /><br />From PaulaRiccarton Primarynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post-60976866585056263882013-05-23T16:35:31.187-07:002013-05-23T16:35:31.187-07:00Great story I really liked how you described what ...Great story I really liked how you described what you were wearing because it makes the story better don't know how to explain.One thing could make it better correct gramma.<br /><br />From Henryroom 6https://www.blogger.com/profile/01571266081124179163noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post-76449260980232314722013-05-23T16:23:24.178-07:002013-05-23T16:23:24.178-07:00I liked how you told me what you and Hannah were w...I liked how you told me what you and Hannah were wearing and that you said you were nervous something you could improve on is describing the setting a bit better. from George Groom 6https://www.blogger.com/profile/01571266081124179163noreply@blogger.com