tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post6308275690698336181..comments2023-03-25T03:58:38.406-07:00Comments on Awahono's Room 6 Blog: Desert IslandUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post-21402533249546772722013-10-28T13:59:56.035-07:002013-10-28T13:59:56.035-07:00feed back nice spelling
feed forward add more to ...feed back nice spelling <br />feed forward add more to it Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post-90726836887064344342013-10-24T18:04:23.538-07:002013-10-24T18:04:23.538-07:00Hi Kyralee, it's Kelly here. You're story ...Hi Kyralee, it's Kelly here. You're story is really exciting and the part about the life guard, well, you'd better keep a sharp eye out for that cousin of yours. You really described some of the characters really well, like when you said about your thick cousin collecting driftwood, but I would try to add a bit more detail on some of them.Kyraleesimpsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14827349400883391851noreply@blogger.com