tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post7050649510074194327..comments2023-03-25T03:58:38.406-07:00Comments on Awahono's Room 6 Blog: Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post-2459006091217052042013-06-19T20:22:05.356-07:002013-06-19T20:22:05.356-07:00hi lititia
i wonder why the aliens would only lan...hi lititia<br /><br />i wonder why the aliens would only land at your backyard?<br />but besides that it was a very interesting story.First i thought that they were harmful, but you added a little twist to the story.christopher & christianhttp://www.56steps.global2.vic.edu.aunoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post-8356152822773969372013-06-19T20:18:26.696-07:002013-06-19T20:18:26.696-07:00Hi our name is Connie and Kristy and were from St....Hi our name is Connie and Kristy and were from St.Elizabeths.We really enjoyed the story it was interesting Maybe you should have put more describing words instead of making it a story other than that it was great.Kristyhttp://www.56steps.global2.vic.edu.aunoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post-18668549297245095402013-06-19T20:17:28.903-07:002013-06-19T20:17:28.903-07:00Hi Lititia,
We really enjoyed your story.I like h...Hi Lititia,<br /><br />We really enjoyed your story.I like how you had a creative mind. It was very creative and interesting.I can't wait to read the next part of the story.<br /><br /><br />From Lydia and KellyKelly and Lydiahttp://56steps.global2.vic.edu.aunoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post-85460617486068160392013-06-18T17:40:51.691-07:002013-06-18T17:40:51.691-07:00Wow Lititia that is really good! I like how you tr...Wow Lititia that is really good! I like how you tried to communicate with the aliens you described it well. And also added a real good ending! I can't wait to hear what happens next!!:)room 6https://www.blogger.com/profile/01571266081124179163noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post-23749184432268617272013-06-18T17:38:33.119-07:002013-06-18T17:38:33.119-07:00Hi Lititia its Katherine and Kelly we both liked y...Hi Lititia its Katherine and Kelly we both liked your story .We both had a picture in our heads and also Kelly thought that the bit where it said "Are they drunk?' I asked myself" was hilarious. Katherine thought it was cool how you said "What was I going to do?" because it sounds like you are going to write more. Great work!!!!room 6https://www.blogger.com/profile/01571266081124179163noreply@blogger.com