tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post8020866703460357526..comments2023-03-25T03:58:38.406-07:00Comments on Awahono's Room 6 Blog: hannahs story the day Lola and Alice met a space creatureUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post-27065816589937825592013-07-30T19:27:35.232-07:002013-07-30T19:27:35.232-07:00I liked your story because you have included descr...I liked your story because you have included descriptive words in your story.<br /><br />Next time you should make your story much more interesting.<br /><br />Riccarton Primary SchoolAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com