tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post8585423034757362645..comments2023-03-25T03:58:38.406-07:00Comments on Awahono's Room 6 Blog: Aaliyahs writing :)Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post-80081372564274859892013-03-13T15:32:07.207-07:002013-03-13T15:32:07.207-07:00'Hi Ali its Hannah here. I love how you said &...'Hi Ali its Hannah here. I love how you said "underground wasteland" and I think its a really good story. You used really good desciptive words. Wally is a really cool name for a robot. I also like the rusty dull weather because it is really descritive and it explains the weather. It also fits because its a westeland and the weather would be rusty.room 6https://www.blogger.com/profile/01571266081124179163noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5503809773035192884.post-75874956567755555112013-03-12T16:51:53.557-07:002013-03-12T16:51:53.557-07:00Hi Aali. It's Kelly here. Just saying what an ...Hi Aali. It's Kelly here. Just saying what an awesome story you created there about Wally the robot. I liked how you said "the rusty dull weather". It really intrigue me and made me want to read on and find out what happened. I was gutted when the paragraph ended because I was enjoying it and I really wanted to read more of your fantastic story. Great punctuation and spelling too. Once again, awesome story!!! room 6https://www.blogger.com/profile/01571266081124179163noreply@blogger.com