Sunday, 23 June 2013

courtneys


 hi guys this is my writing.  The day I  met a space creature



Courtneys writing.
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3 comments:

  1. room 623 June 2013 at 17:35

    Cool story Courtney! I like how you described the alien well. Might need to touch up a few spelling mistakes tho. But still a AWESOME story!

    Thanks! Emma :)

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  2. room 623 June 2013 at 17:40

    thank for that then

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  3. Anonymous30 July 2013 at 19:21

    Great story! I like how you put all the details that happened in your story.

    Next time you should check your punctuation before you post your story.

    Riccarton Primary School

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