Great descriptive language and i liked how you described your story and it goes with the flowlike the start were it said the one the onlyyyyyyokay i will stop partfrom jade
Very interesting and it starts off good and ends very good- karim and James
Thanks guys, I'm glad you liked my story. I think its good to. LOL :)
Great descriptive language and i liked how you described your story and it goes with the flow
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Very interesting and it starts off good and ends very good- karim and James
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