Thursday, 23 May 2013

The Day I Jumped Out Of A Plane!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AAZvoPpznIbr1_hCK8BGHYxckBvVmbxZUoPwDAMG1S0/edit
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous13 June 2013 at 19:35

    Great story Blake!! I really liked the description you used in it, it really painted a picture in my mind, well done!!
    From Silvie :)
    Kaharoa

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  2. Anonymous17 June 2013 at 15:38

    great! i love it the description is awesome good work

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  3. Vinaya17 June 2013 at 15:39

    I really liked your story Blake! It was interesting.
    Next time don't forget to put explanation marks when someone is speaking.

    By,
    Vinaya

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