Monday, 17 June 2013

bens the day I met a space creature.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YMl5a6dlxJ4oy75eYYO_KtIS_dY_2X7TtbgRV9pc28c/edit
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  1. room 618 June 2013 at 17:28

    Hi Ben, its Kelly and Katherine. Just had to say what an awesome story it was. We both had a vivid image in our head and it was so thrilling! You used lots of good words to describe things like the alien. We loved the part where you said "I'm allergic to spaceships" it was so funny!!!

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  2. room 618 June 2013 at 17:31

    Wow great imagination, great descriptive words.:D

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