Hi George I like your story because its credible and realistic. What I'd improve on is don't use as much of 'as I begin to panic' I've seen that a couple times but its a very interesting story. :)
Hi George I like your story because its credible and realistic. What I'd improve on is don't use as much of 'as I begin to panic' I've seen that a couple times but its a very interesting story. :)
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