Hi Lititia its Katherine and Kelly we both liked your story .We both had a picture in our heads and also Kelly thought that the bit where it said "Are they drunk?' I asked myself" was hilarious. Katherine thought it was cool how you said "What was I going to do?" because it sounds like you are going to write more. Great work!!!!
Wow Lititia that is really good! I like how you tried to communicate with the aliens you described it well. And also added a real good ending! I can't wait to hear what happens next!!:)
Hi our name is Connie and Kristy and were from St.Elizabeths.We really enjoyed the story it was interesting Maybe you should have put more describing words instead of making it a story other than that it was great.
i wonder why the aliens would only land at your backyard? but besides that it was a very interesting story.First i thought that they were harmful, but you added a little twist to the story.
Hi Lititia its Katherine and Kelly we both liked your story .We both had a picture in our heads and also Kelly thought that the bit where it said "Are they drunk?' I asked myself" was hilarious. Katherine thought it was cool how you said "What was I going to do?" because it sounds like you are going to write more. Great work!!!!
ReplyDeleteWow Lititia that is really good! I like how you tried to communicate with the aliens you described it well. And also added a real good ending! I can't wait to hear what happens next!!:)
ReplyDeleteHi Lititia,
ReplyDeleteWe really enjoyed your story.I like how you had a creative mind. It was very creative and interesting.I can't wait to read the next part of the story.
From Lydia and Kelly
Hi our name is Connie and Kristy and were from St.Elizabeths.We really enjoyed the story it was interesting Maybe you should have put more describing words instead of making it a story other than that it was great.
ReplyDeletehi lititia
ReplyDeletei wonder why the aliens would only land at your backyard?
but besides that it was a very interesting story.First i thought that they were harmful, but you added a little twist to the story.