Room One Learners: Writing Helpful Blog Comments

Room One Learners: Writing Helpful Blog Comments: We are learning to write helpful comments on other people's blogs.  We know we've given good feedback to the writer when we: C om...

the day i jumped out of a plane

https://docs.google.com/document/d/14-2MJSoacp0oUQMRzf_JDuvTTd52ZrP2m0ibP-i7vZs/edit?usp=sharing   by blake

THE DAY I JUMPED OUT OF THE PLANE

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VvDNg0udXGwtpbDmXZCuuLfZiHK9kf9x1-rgk0gFPBc/edit

 

 

The Day I Jumped Out Of A Plane!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AAZvoPpznIbr1_hCK8BGHYxckBvVmbxZUoPwDAMG1S0/edit

Kyralee's story

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lDLglxS9UU_Dj0RupcMHLzs4C2yw0VeGX_PdZdKchog/editThe day I jumped out of a plane

Aaliyahs story about The day I jumped out of a plane

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LUia0T49YgGvJ84FNa7oXZUIffJb-FlY0ePGvN0nI-M/edit?usp=sharing

THE DAY I JUMPED OUT OF A PLANE by alex hart

                  PLUMMETING  

 WALT : Use descriptive language to make writing more interesting.

As I secured my goggles to my helmet and strapped my boots on, my stomach churning as I stepped to the edge. I lothe heights but I know that the Ahaura townsfolk would be cheering for me down below as I was about to say no I felt a vicious shove in the back and before I knew it I was plummeting 3000 feet.