George here, good story. You described the landscape very well and my favourite part was when you said "luckily for me I had a expert shouting what to do"I liked it because it was funny.
I really enjoyed reading your writing. It gave me a good picture in my head and you used good descriptive words. You described the setting really well when you said "I am now falling into the unknown regions".
George here, good story. You described the landscape very well and my favourite part was when you said "luckily for me I had a expert shouting what to do"I liked it because it was funny.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your writing. It gave me a good picture in my head and you used good descriptive words. You described the setting really well when you said "I am now falling into the unknown regions".
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