LOL! That is an awesome story about Rusty the robot. It is so intreiging, makes me want to read more and uses really descriptive language. I really liked the part when you put "what should he do?" because it freaked me out and made me wonder what would happen to him. I wondered if he would get out of the brown room and, like I said before, it made me want to read on. From your BFF!
Good story Kat. Your description of the room it was superb and i loved the part at the end when it says, "what should he do?"I liked it because its so mysterious and making me want to read more. Great story again from George. Bye.
I think that is a marvellous piece of writting, I wouldn't change a thing. I really like how you said Rusty fell down off the bridge and took a good knock because it is described so well and I have a perfect picture in my head. Great job!
LOL! That is an awesome story about Rusty the robot. It is so intreiging, makes me want to read more and uses really descriptive language. I really liked the part when you put "what should he do?" because it freaked me out and made me wonder what would happen to him. I wondered if he would get out of the brown room and, like I said before, it made me want to read on. From your BFF!
ReplyDeleteGood story Kat. Your description of the room it was superb and i loved the part at the end when it says, "what should he do?"I liked it because its so mysterious and making me want to read more. Great story again from George. Bye.
ReplyDeleteI think that is a marvellous piece of writting, I wouldn't change a thing. I really like how you said Rusty fell down off the bridge and took a good knock because it is described so well and I have a perfect picture in my head. Great job!
ReplyDeleteNice, Rusty sounds like a pretty cool robot. :)
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