The day I met the
space creature
As I climbed on
the spaceship the count down from 30 begun I zipped up the ladder to my seat.
Just in time to as it went 3…2…1… lift of. The rockets fired into life. At
9:45. Mushin control said, “You are 10 mints away form the moon”. After 5 mints
after that I could see the silver lining of the moon. Mushin control called
back and said that they have lost control of the spaceship and its heading for
a black hole. 2 seconds later I can see the black hole. All of a sudden a
little green man pushes the spaceship out of the way and towards the moon. I
owe my life to that little green man.
Lol good work funny story 10 mints lol ;)
ReplyDeleteHay Ben I like your story and I think you have used very descriptive words. It all links together really well. I liked the bit when you said i zipped up the ladder. I think you need to work on your spelling. By Hannah
ReplyDeleteGreat story Ben I really liked the part where you k3pt talking to mission control
ReplyDeleteGood story I like how you said I zipped up the ladder cool :D
ReplyDeleteIt's an interesting story to read and has a little bit of the alien description. Maybe next time you could add a little more bit of describing the alien. The realistic parts is when mission control calls you a dozen times, that's what I like a lot.
ReplyDeleteCool story the spelling of mission is wrong but still cool and my favourite bit was when the green man pushed the ship out of the black hole.-George m
ReplyDeleteGreat story Ben some of your spelling is incorect ten mints I think you mean ten minutes, mushin control it's mission control.I like how you put the green man pushed your spaceship away from the black hole. BY ALEX HART
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