Tuesday 21 May 2013

The Day I jumped out of a Plane

Hi everyone. This is my latest story. Hope you enjoy. By Jess

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HqF4DYDi2CeMpBB1clQ_TN9U2BcvB-LRRnQk3-RLQXg/edit?usp=sharing

1 comment:

  1. I liked that you used a good variety of interesting words.... :)
    Next time you should use more full stops and commas..

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