Sunday, 8 September 2013

Alex Hart's Jack And the Beanstalk wirting


Jack was a poor and helpless boy. His mother died when he was 10 and he had nothing but a pen. So one day he sold that pen for 3 magic bean’s .The owner of the beans said. “ There’s one of corn and one of wheat but the other one will grow right before your feet, so plant it when the time is right and you won’t regret it all your life”. Jack planted the beans and as the owner said there was one of corn, one of wheat and one huge beanstalk. Jack was baffled, so he pinched himself “No not dreaming”. So he climbed the mighty bean and as Jack reached the top he was choking and spluttering because of the huge climb. He saw a huge castle with green flags. “FEE FI FO FUM I SMELL CAKE IN THE KITCHEN.” Jack was terrified so disobeying his instincts he went to investigate what had made the noises. It was a Giant, 10 feet tall “HELLO CAKE, COME TO ME.” said the Giant spitting all over the floor.
“Giant I have corn for you.”
“It’s better than cake.”
“GIVE ME THIS CORN” said the Giant
“For what?”
“3 GOLDEN EGGS FOR 3 OF THIS CORN” replied the Giant
The Giant loved the corn and Jack was a millionaire in 3 hours, the town was rich and being magic beans the corn that Jack planted on his lawn grew back.
                       The End

Cinderella (remade)

3 Little pigs

One day three boys went to work on a cold Saturday morning. They were employed at a old rickety sawmill where they shovelled up loose sawdust and bark then they put it into a old loader bucket.

The three boys were only twelve years old but they were quite muscly and intelligent. The boys were wearing old raggedy clothes and their names were Tao, George and Henry.

Tao, George and Henry were working a normal day except they were working Extra hours and when you have to shovel up scrapes for four hours it gets boring, so George and Tao started rushing and when they rushed they weren't doing it properly. Then the big boss flew over to us in his truck. "Tao George what are you doing, I mean your not even getting any scrapes in the bin!" Then the big intimidating man screamed and shouted and fired them. 

Then Henry (the remaining worker) got a raise and eventually became a millionaire.
The end is my fabulous story by ME!!!

Jack and the bean stalk by Ben Williams

Jack And The Beanstalk (Modified) By Karim

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work hard get rewarded by blake

Jack And The Beanstalk by Regan

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Here is my Jack and the Beanstalk story. Hope you enjoy it. ;-)