Sunday, 8 September 2013

Jack And The Beanstalk (Modified) By Karim

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Hope You Like It. :-)


  1. Great discrptive writing and it hasn't changed much from the original story- by James baker

  2. Hi Karim, it's Regan here, I like the fact as in how you described your story so well and I actually had a picture in my mind. One thing I would improve on is making your writing more visible. That would make it really sawgilicous.