JACK & THE BEANSTALK
Jack
was a poor and helpless boy. His mother died when he was 10 and he had nothing
but a pen. So one day he sold that pen for 3 magic bean’s .The owner of the
beans said. “ There’s one of corn and one of wheat but the other one will grow
right before your feet, so plant it when the time is right and you won’t regret
it all your life”. Jack planted the beans and as the owner said there was one
of corn, one of wheat and one huge beanstalk. Jack was baffled, so he pinched
himself “No not dreaming”. So he climbed the mighty bean and as Jack reached
the top he was choking and spluttering because of the huge climb. He saw a huge
castle with green flags. “FEE FI FO FUM I SMELL CAKE IN THE KITCHEN.” Jack was
terrified so disobeying his instincts he went to investigate what had made the
noises. It was a Giant, 10 feet tall “HELLO CAKE, COME TO ME.” said the Giant
spitting all over the floor.
“Giant
I have corn for you.”
“CORN
WHAT’S THAT?”
“It’s
better than cake.”
“GIVE
ME THIS CORN” said the Giant
“For
what?”
“3
GOLDEN EGGS FOR 3 OF THIS CORN” replied the Giant
“Deal”
The
Giant loved the corn and Jack was a millionaire in 3 hours, the town was rich
and being magic beans the corn that Jack planted on his lawn grew back.
The End
Great story Alex I really liked how you were rhyming like when you said his mother died when he was ten and now he only has a pen. One thing you could of worked on if your rhyming try and do it through out the whole story otherwise great story.
ReplyDelete-Henry
thank you, you inspire me to write more story's :)
DeleteI love your rhymes Alex my favourite is the one "one of corn, one of wheat and one that grow beneath your feet. But one thing you could inprove on is that you could describe the characters a bit better George :)
ReplyDeletethank you
Deletethanks for the comment but i liked how it ended
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