Sunday 23 June 2013

courtneys


 hi guys this is my writing.  The day I  met a space creature



Courtneys writing.

3 comments:

  1. Cool story Courtney! I like how you described the alien well. Might need to touch up a few spelling mistakes tho. But still a AWESOME story!

    Thanks! Emma :)

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  2. Great story! I like how you put all the details that happened in your story.

    Next time you should check your punctuation before you post your story.

    Riccarton Primary School

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