Sunday 23 June 2013

hannahs story the day Lola and Alice met a space creature

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cx4m4iFgFvwu_5banbNaIa-LYsFRrCmctQ-t46hZMik/edit?usp=sharing
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  1. Anonymous30 July 2013 at 19:27

    I liked your story because you have included descriptive words in your story.

    Next time you should make your story much more interesting.

    Riccarton Primary School

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