Tuesday 18 June 2013

Henry's the day I met a space creature the other one did not work

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GWkA102UlMZSoTT5hE-hsdhO7uhu3RJPddk4gPF9jSI/mobilebasic
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  1. Shannan & Lorenzo19 June 2013 at 20:24

    Hi henry,
    i liked your story. It wasn't the most descriptive one but i liked how it was funny. There were a few english mistakes.
    From Shannan & Lorenzo

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  2. Anonymous17 August 2013 at 20:20

    Hi Henry, Your story was really descriptive and funny. There were a few spelling mistakes but in the end it was cool. Good work.

    Lititia

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