Monday 17 June 2013

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kto7ZomrKhz6tGD5shI7-KJn8bWhIPFcEhC2XgIWMSQ/edit

1 comment:

  1. Hi George I like your story because its credible and realistic. What I'd improve on is don't use as much of 'as I begin to panic' I've seen that a couple times but its a very interesting story. :)

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