Thursday, 7 March 2013

hannahs writing

 this is my descriptive writing


  1. Hi Hannah it's Kelly speaking. I absolutly HAD to comment on your fantabulous story about Rex. It really intrigued me and made me want to read on. I was bombed when it ended because I was enjoying it a lot. It is really descriptive like Aaliyahs. Awesome story Hannah!!!

  2. Hay hannah aaliyah speaking I absolutly had to comment on your awesome story. You have decribed Rex very well and I wanted to read on. I like the bit when you say "The dull weather made him feel alone". I also liked your ending. Fabulous story about Rex hannah :)