Thursday 7 March 2013

Regan's writing




https://docs.google.com/document/d/1B8YXDmxQsZ205imtLTto0BFGdeg9cAkbietLvqbmysw/edit?usp=sharing



This is my writing

2 comments:

  1. George here, good story. You described the landscape very well and my favourite part was when you said "luckily for me I had a expert shouting what to do"I liked it because it was funny.

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  2. I really enjoyed reading your writing. It gave me a good picture in my head and you used good descriptive words. You described the setting really well when you said "I am now falling into the unknown regions".

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