Monday, 9 September 2013

Jack and the Beanstalk


  1. I liked the way you changed the traditional rhyme of “Fe fi fo fum smull the blad of an englishman be him green or be him red I still want to give him a golden egg". It really sets the story up well for Jack to receive the golden eggs. I would suggest you check your spelling a little more before you publish as sometimes it was difficult to understand the full meaning of some of your sentences

  2. WOW

    What a great story you have published on google docs i recommend that story to be published s a real kids story book.

    From Daniel P3 Mokoia intermediate